Thursday, January 12, 2012

PLEASE CORRECT THIS STORY.

Peter’s new friend
Once there lived a boy named Peter. He was kind to the poor people and children. He often gave them his toys to play because he had no friends. He only could play with them in school because far in the cities. Once he was going along a haunted house were he saw three robbers going inside the house only one robber came out and ran fast. Now he realize that there was a ghost and ran fast to school. Soon when he was leaving school he taught about the ghost and decided to take a bus or a taxi. Has he passed the house he taught the ghost would come out and kill them too. He started telling the bus driver “go fast” but the bus driver refused to go fast because the bus might fall down. The next day Peter he himself went into the house and when he saw the ghost, the ghost came running and huged him and peter saw the two robbers at the conner and then the ghost removed his mask. Now peter realized that his grandfather had not yet died, and then peter was now happy.

THIS WAS WRITTEN BY MY SON AARON LAST MONTH. I PUBLISH IT HERE AS TEXT FOR PUNCTUATION AND GRAMMAR WITH HIS PERMISSION.
AURIEL

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